I spent the latter part of 2012 reeling – in the best way. After signing up with Julia at The Greenhouse, she told me her plan was to give Leah Thaxton, who had just stepped into her new role as Publisher (Children's) at Faber and Faber, one month to look at three Squishy McFluff texts. If she made an offer by the end of the that time, well, fabulous! If not, Squishy McFluff would go prowling around all the other children's publishers looking for a home.

By this point, after lots of chats with Julia, I'd begun to realise that McFluff was perhaps not destined to be in picture books as I had once thought (or rather, hoped).

This was great news to me in one major way – of the three texts that had gone to Leah, the shortest was the first story, Squishy McFluff, the Invisible Cat, which was about 750 words.

The other two were around 850 words and 900 words respectively – all of them massively too long to fit into a picture book format. Debut authors writing picture books, I'd learned since doing all that writing, should produce a text of no more than 500 words. English, you see, is the most succinct of languages – after being translated for European markets, a book could gain as much as a third of its length. All those extra words simply wouldn't fit.

But Julia's thought, from the outset, was that McFluff could be something else – a format that bridges the gap between picture book and early reader. It's something Alex T Smith has successfully done with his Claude books, and perhaps something Dr Seuss did a long time ago with his brilliantly ridiculous rhyming stories.

Well, a week or so after receiving the manuscripts, Leah invited Julia and I in to have a chat about where Squishy McFluff might go, what might be done with him. Julia steeled me for a casual meeting. Dashed hopes are horribly painful. While almost wetting my pants, I probably falsely assured her I'd be taking neither eggs nor baskets.

As it was, the meeting blew me away. It wasn't at all what I'd expected. Rebecca Lee (editor) had made a tin of invisible cat cupcakes, complete with chocolate mice. In the corner of the room was a cat basket with a label on it bearing Squishy's name. They'd stopped short of a litter tray. Unless there was an invisible one and I didn't see it.

These lovely people at Faber (FABER!) were genuinely excited about Squishy McFluff. They totally got him; they understood who he was, and why he was so curious and naughty. We talked (and laughed) about the complexities of illustrating a cat who was invisible. They loved him as much as I did. Wow. 

I left the meeting a little numb, walking on air, full of hope. Julia and I went and used a voucher I had (I LOVE a voucher, don't you?) for a free bottle of cava and we drank it outside in the cold.

Early in October, Julia called me to say Leah had made an offer, and it was a good offer. No, a GREAT offer. Now, I've never had an offer from a publisher before, and of course it's really key to have trust in your agent, to know that they'll find not just a deal for you, but the best deal they can. Julia had again steeled me for nothing coming through, but I don't know, I think she was quietly confident – and, when it came, she was delighted. 

Although I hadn't a clue about this process, even I could see that Leah's offer was amazing. I'm not just talking about being offered actual money for something I'd written, I'm talking about the passion and the excitement behind it, the plans Leah had for Squishy's future.

The pitch she sent, for four books, was written almost entirely in verse, which made me both laugh and cry. It had quotes from people working in every corner of Faber. Shall I insert a cat pun in here? Shall I? Oh okaaaay: it was purrrfect. They really wanted to give Squishy McFluff a home.

Obviously, all of this was fantastic, exhilarating, incredible – but does it sound strange to say it also felt a bit odd?! I can feel myself building up to some kind of unrequited love metaphor. You know? Hankering after someone so much, and for so long, wishing they'd turn around and say: 'Yes I like you too, actually.' And then they do, and you go: '… … Er… gosh… um… really…? ………… REALLY?!'

Yes. It felt a bit like that. The tables switched. ODD! After thinking for ages: 'Please read it, someone. Please like it. Please take it on. Please want to publish it', now I had a pitch from Faber asking ME to take Squishy McFluff to them. I know I keep saying it, but FABER!

Anyway. My response?

'Oh, go on then.' 

Ha ha! I wonder if Leah sensed me mentally biting her hand off? 

So, there it was, Squishy's future starting to unfold. There was one little part of it that felt a bit daunting. The format meant that rather than cutting the stories to picture book length (which, in all honesty, I would have hated), I would be extending them. And I wasn't sure by how much…

Well that was last year and now, in 2013 the work on the first book is underway! I've been beavering away at extending the first text with the advice and support of my publisher (!), and I'll write about that here soon.

In the meantime, if you like verse (and I REALLY hope you do) have you seen Elli Woollard's Taking Words For a Stroll? It always makes me grin :D





 
 


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Ruth Doyle Walter
04/23/2013 1:54am

Congrats on winning the Greenhouse Funny Prize & your publishing contract! Really enjoying your blog & feeling `inspired'! It's encouraging to know that breakthroughs happen - I've come close a couple of times with picture book texts & then had the "not quite right for us" put-down! So I'm vicariously enjoying your success!! Can't wait to read the books.

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Pip
04/23/2013 11:36pm

Thanks Ruth, the prize was fantastic. Are you going to enter this year? I'm ever so please that people are finding this blog inspiring, so I hope you push on.

Pip x

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Ally Thompson
04/25/2013 2:55am

Hi Pip... I had read about you on the Greenhouse website so it's been lovely to find that you have a blog and that you're willing to share the ride (and what a fantastic one so far!) with the rest of us... I've had ideas rattling around inside my head for years now. It's only this year that I've decided to take the plunge and to try and do something about them. Off the back of my maternity leave I've taken a further twelve months career break and the disciplined writing has begun! I've just finished the 6wk Children's Writing Course with the Writer's Workshop and really enjoyed each week's challenge. Did you do any courses before entering the Greenhouse Funny Comp? I'm struggling with the whole idea of finally putting my stories out there for others to read... bit like jumping off the high diving board, deep intake of breath and here we go...
Thanks again for sharing... I'll be following your progress and can't wait to see (maybe wrong choice of words for an invisible cat!) Scruffy in print. Huge congrats. Ally

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Pip
04/25/2013 6:25am

Hi Ally,

Thanks ever so much for reading, and for your comments. No I never have taken any writing courses – it's good to hear you got so much out of yours. I've been writing my whole life, when I was a child, from the age of about nine, I would spend my weekends scrawling and scrawling stories. I churned them out! A birthday present one year was a typewriter. A birthday present two years later was a word processor! But Squishy McFluff came about quite organically really, and I never actually sat down and set out to attempt to publish a children's book as bizarre as that sounds. I began wanting to know if the column I had written COULD be a children's story. And when I discovered it could, I carried on writing him because it was so fun. Gradually the desire built to get him out there. Til it was a burning passion obviously!

Well, you know, you and a couple of other people who have left me comments, have inspired me to write my next blog post – which I am going to start right now!

Thanks again, keep writing and good luck with it, keep me posted with your progress!

Pip

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Ally
04/30/2013 1:30pm

Thanks for replying Pip... It sounds as though we had some similar childhood experiences! I wrote my first book aged 8 :-). Very, very heavily based on the Famous Five and the Secret Seven Books that I hungrily devoured around that age. It revolved around the exploits of myself and my three best girl friends. It was written in a spiral bound notebook with horses on the front and I clearly remember having to read it out in instalments in primary school! My brothers and I had a Vic 20 computer that was considered state-of-the-art at the time with its whirring cassette deck and then I progressed to a word processor the Christmas I was 14... Here I am 26 years later, a journalist by trade, trying to make sense of some of those story ideas I've had rattling around in my head for years.
The Writing Course was good in that it gave me deadlines and challenges to meet each week. Having been off on maternity, it was great to kick-start me into writing again and a welcome break from nappies and baby talk.
Really great to hear about your own path to success... I'm setting myself some challenges for the year ahead so fingers crossed I can rise to them. Good luck and look forward to your next blog.
Ally

Ally Thompson
04/30/2013 1:30pm

Thanks for replying Pip... It sounds as though we had some similar childhood experiences! I wrote my first book aged 8 :-). Very, very heavily based on the Famous Five and the Secret Seven Books that I hungrily devoured around that age. It revolved around the exploits of myself and my three best girl friends. It was written in a spiral bound notebook with horses on the front and I clearly remember having to read it out in instalments in primary school! My brothers and I had a Vic 20 computer that was considered state-of-the-art at the time with its whirring cassette deck and then I progressed to a word processor the Christmas I was 14... Here I am 26 years later, a journalist by trade, trying to make sense of some of those story ideas I've had rattling around in my head for years.
The Writing Course was good in that it gave me deadlines and challenges to meet each week. Having been off on maternity, it was great to kick-start me into writing again and a welcome break from nappies and baby talk.
Really great to hear about your own path to success... I'm setting myself some challenges for the year ahead so fingers crossed I can rise to them. Good luck and look forward to your next blog.
Ally

Ally Thompson
04/25/2013 2:58am

Apologies, teething 11 month old burrowing into me on the sofa! I meant "Squishy"!! Perhaps Scruffy is a long lost cousin... ;-)

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Ally Thompson
04/25/2013 2:58am

Apologies, teething 11 month old burrowing into me on the sofa! In my post above I meant "Squishy"!! Perhaps Scruffy is a long lost cousin... ;-)

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